eeeeeeeeee omg this took SO LONG.. 3-4 hours nonstop baaaahhh
Anyways this is a giftie for my hubby ~Narusoniamy ♥ our 13 month was yesterday and I couldn't see him ;_; so I was sad.. so I made this today because I lav him ;3;
Looooooook its Eikaila and Aku c: I miss having Aku as my sona but I like Eikaila's design so >W<
I was trying to straighten out my perspective problems.. >A> I have a lazy eye + dystonia so when it comes to proportioning and sighting I'm really not good with it at all ;fgfhfgfjhgfdg
Also I've never done anything with water-related effects so I wanted to try that >W<
Yes that river is really deep asfdghfd
SO PLEASE TELL ME HOW I DID! In a critique or a comment would be nice ^_^
Overall, this is beautiful. Showing us how much he means to you.
Vision: The picture clearly shows how you feel about your relationship with your boyfriend. The idea is good, I think adding the sunset in was a lovely idea.
Originality: I haven't really seen this type of drawing style from you before. But I think it's wonderful and maybe you should a bit more. I don't think I see many fursona couple pictures were the Ocs are like this, from it's angle etc. So great job on making something original!
Technique: I can clearly see a good technique being used here. I love the idea of it. The grass looks lovely. You how shown were the water is flowing from. However, I would suggest you blend the water meeting with the grass more, maybe make it a bit more muddy? To really show the effects when the water touches the grassland. I would also say, bend the bridge in more with the grass to, however I'm not sure how to explain how to, sorry.
Impact: Overall, it's gives off a great impact. From your other pieces, we can all clearly you love him and him alone, you want to keep him, treasure him forever. I think this is a wonderful piece, one of the best from you.
Omfg this is so beautiful ;o; You've improved so much Fefe, I absolutely love the background asdfghj <3 It has such a warm, lovely feeling to it, I really really enjoy this picture uvu <333 Keep up the amazing work bby~
Vision: The picture clearly shows how you feel about your relationship with your boyfriend. The idea is good, I think adding the sunset in was a lovely idea.
Originality: I haven't really seen this type of drawing style from you before. But I think it's wonderful and maybe you should a bit more. I don't think I see many fursona couple pictures were the Ocs are like this, from it's angle etc. So great job on making something original!
Technique: I can clearly see a good technique being used here. I love the idea of it. The grass looks lovely. You how shown were the water is flowing from. However, I would suggest you blend the water meeting with the grass more, maybe make it a bit more muddy? To really show the effects when the water touches the grassland. I would also say, bend the bridge in more with the grass to, however I'm not sure how to explain how to, sorry.
Impact: Overall, it's gives off a great impact. From your other pieces, we can all clearly you love him and him alone, you want to keep him, treasure him forever. I think this is a wonderful piece, one of the best from you.
Keep up your hard work! c:
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