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We can have our hearts sink undersea by bambous We can have our hearts sink undersea by bambous
Because I love you is such an understatement.

eeeeeeeeee omg this took SO LONG.. 3-4 hours nonstop baaaahhh

Anyways this is a giftie for my hubby ~Narusoniamy ♥ our 13 month was yesterday and I couldn't see him ;_; so I was sad.. so I made this today because I lav him ;3;

Looooooook its Eikaila and Aku c: I miss having Aku as my sona but I like Eikaila's design so >W<

I was trying to straighten out my perspective problems.. >A> I have a lazy eye + dystonia so when it comes to proportioning and sighting I'm really not good with it at all ;fgfhfgfjhgfdg

Also I've never done anything with water-related effects so I wanted to try that >W<

Yes that river is really deep asfdghfd

SO PLEASE TELL ME HOW I DID! In a critique or a comment would be nice ^_^

Thanks for reading! I hope you like it ;w; ~
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:iconfreyaleafy:
Overall, this is beautiful. :heart: Showing us how much he means to you.

Vision: The picture clearly shows how you feel about your relationship with your boyfriend. The idea is good, I think adding the sunset in was a lovely idea.

Originality: I haven't really seen this type of drawing style from you before. But I think it's wonderful and maybe you should a bit more. I don't think I see many fursona couple pictures were the Ocs are like this, from it's angle etc. So great job on making something original!

Technique: I can clearly see a good technique being used here. I love the idea of it. The grass looks lovely. You how shown were the water is flowing from. However, I would suggest you blend the water meeting with the grass more, maybe make it a bit more muddy? To really show the effects when the water touches the grassland. I would also say, bend the bridge in more with the grass to, however I'm not sure how to explain how to, sorry.

Impact: Overall, it's gives off a great impact. From your other pieces, we can all clearly you love him and him alone, you want to keep him, treasure him forever. I think this is a wonderful piece, one of the best from you.

Keep up your hard work! c:
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karazii Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Omfg this is so beautiful ;o; You've improved so much Fefe, I absolutely love the background asdfghj <3
It has such a warm, lovely feeling to it, I really really enjoy this picture uvu <333
Keep up the amazing work bby~
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EpicTwizzy Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
aww how cute!! c:
thats so pretty.
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xMzMurderx Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012   General Artist
this is beautiful :3
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bambous Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you anoritah c:
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xMzMurderx Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012   General Artist
Your welcome :3
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neck-bites Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Very beautiful c:
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bambous Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^u^
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PusillanimousPie Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Good job!
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:iconbambous:
bambous Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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Dinowolf98 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Everything looks wonderful whatsoever- You did really great!

psssst that was sweet of you to make this for him c:
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bambous Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! ^-^

hehehe >//> thank you xD c:
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HELI0TROPE Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow this looks really good!!
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:iconbambous:
bambous Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks ! ^_^
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TheCelestialRose Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
awwwwwwwww their so adorable QUQ
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bambous Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
bawahaw thank you <3
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TheCelestialRose Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
your welcome QWQ
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Sisa611 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student General Artist
I think you did a really nice job on this! It looks really good :)

Although I think you should've made the sides of the water straight by the bridge, if you get what I mean :3

I'm not so good at critiques, so forgive me xD
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bambous Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :3

And I know what you mean xD I was going to say in the description The workers who made the bridge were too lazy to even the sides so the bridge they made was only the right size for there 8D

Thank you though XDDD
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Sisa611 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem, and haha xDD Oh dem lazy workers these days..


You're welcome c: XD
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thesignguy123 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thats really cute, water looks nice
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bambous Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you
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thesignguy123 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome
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