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November 24, 2012
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We can have our hearts sink undersea by bambous We can have our hearts sink undersea by bambous
Because I love you is such an understatement.

eeeeeeeeee omg this took SO LONG.. 3-4 hours nonstop baaaahhh

Anyways this is a giftie for my hubby ~Narusoniamy ♥ our 13 month was yesterday and I couldn't see him ;_; so I was sad.. so I made this today because I lav him ;3;

Looooooook its Eikaila and Aku c: I miss having Aku as my sona but I like Eikaila's design so >W<

I was trying to straighten out my perspective problems.. >A> I have a lazy eye + dystonia so when it comes to proportioning and sighting I'm really not good with it at all ;fgfhfgfjhgfdg

Also I've never done anything with water-related effects so I wanted to try that >W<

Yes that river is really deep asfdghfd

SO PLEASE TELL ME HOW I DID! In a critique or a comment would be nice ^_^

Thanks for reading! I hope you like it ;w; ~
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Overall, this is beautiful. :heart: Showing us how much he means to you.

Vision: The picture clearly shows how you feel about your relationship with your boyfriend. The idea is good, I think adding the sunset in was a lovely idea.

Originality: I haven't really seen this type of drawing style from you before. But I think it's wonderful and maybe you should a bit more. I don't think I see many fursona couple pictures were the Ocs are like this, from it's angle etc. So great job on making something original!

Technique: I can clearly see a good technique being used here. I love the idea of it. The grass looks lovely. You how shown were the water is flowing from. However, I would suggest you blend the water meeting with the grass more, maybe make it a bit more muddy? To really show the effects when the water touches the grassland. I would also say, bend the bridge in more with the grass to, however I'm not sure how to explain how to, sorry.

Impact: Overall, it's gives off a great impact. From your other pieces, we can all clearly you love him and him alone, you want to keep him, treasure him forever. I think this is a wonderful piece, one of the best from you.

Keep up your hard work! c:
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karazii Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Omfg this is so beautiful ;o; You've improved so much Fefe, I absolutely love the background asdfghj <3
It has such a warm, lovely feeling to it, I really really enjoy this picture uvu <333
Keep up the amazing work bby~
aww how cute!! c:
thats so pretty.
xMzMurderx Nov 24, 2012   General Artist
this is beautiful :3
bambous Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you anoritah c:
xMzMurderx Nov 25, 2012   General Artist
Your welcome :3
Very beautiful c:
bambous Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^u^
bambous Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dinowolf98 Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Everything looks wonderful whatsoever- You did really great!

psssst that was sweet of you to make this for him c:
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