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Well I've been trying to think of ways to make my current characters more natural colored, but I love them the way they are.. but why not make a new one? And boom! We have a new character!
This is indeed my first natural colored character! x"D I actually needed a natural colors palette to figure out some colors orz;;
But yes! She is a fox (haven't decided what breed yet).
She's my new excuse to study fox anatomy~ Woohoo~ I've honestly wanted to study it, because I love the body structure of them
but now I can study it more!
Also, I do need help with anatomy! That's why this is an open-critique piece, and my first one on this account! :3
I'm very open with critiques so hit me with all you've got!
In your critique..
-You may talk about whatever you wish! Whatever you like, or something that needs improvement (and how I can improve it)
-I'm not really looking for design critique (because this design isn't final) but suggestions are okay!
-Please don't be harsh! There is a difference between critiquing and bashing.
-Disregard the eye shading please
I can't help but shade eyes I don't know why @_@
What I'm mostly looking for help on..
-Paws and Leg joints (I am horrible with them XD)
-Head anatomy
-Leg anatomy (in this case front legs)
-Body structure
-Tail anatomy (I need help making it wavy ><)
Something I noticed as typing this: The back leg is too short. XD
Please also tell me ways I can fix these mistakes
Thank you guys!
Oh also I haven't decided on a name quite yet. I have a few in mind.. I'll decide later xD
This is indeed my first natural colored character! x"D I actually needed a natural colors palette to figure out some colors orz;;
But yes! She is a fox (haven't decided what breed yet).
She's my new excuse to study fox anatomy~ Woohoo~ I've honestly wanted to study it, because I love the body structure of them
but now I can study it more!Also, I do need help with anatomy! That's why this is an open-critique piece, and my first one on this account! :3
I'm very open with critiques so hit me with all you've got!
In your critique..
-You may talk about whatever you wish! Whatever you like, or something that needs improvement (and how I can improve it)
-I'm not really looking for design critique (because this design isn't final) but suggestions are okay!
-Please don't be harsh! There is a difference between critiquing and bashing.
-Disregard the eye shading please
I can't help but shade eyes I don't know why @_@What I'm mostly looking for help on..
-Paws and Leg joints (I am horrible with them XD)
-Head anatomy
-Leg anatomy (in this case front legs)
-Body structure
-Tail anatomy (I need help making it wavy ><)
Something I noticed as typing this: The back leg is too short. XD
Please also tell me ways I can fix these mistakes
Thank you guys!
Oh also I haven't decided on a name quite yet. I have a few in mind.. I'll decide later xD
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique ImpactThis is really cute! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Big Grin)"/> i say good job for your first attempt at fox anatomy! This is my first attempt at a critique, so please forgive me if it seems like it is all over that place. >.<
now pros:
-I can tell that this is a fox. xD even if she isn't an adult fox. (to me she looks like a fox pup)
-your paws and ears look very accurate <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Big Grin)"/>... well the face in general looks really nice -i like how you did the fur. I just want to reach out and pet because it looks really soft >.>
cons:
-no neck definition. give just a little indication of a neck. It looks like the body ate the neck ><
- shorten the legs in the front. they seem a little long for the body of the fox
my best recommendation to learn animal anatomy is look up fox anatomy/tips here on deviant art/look at photos of foxes from google images. that is how I learned the anatomy for wolves and the big cats. I think that if you do that, you will be on the right track! (I hope you find this critique to be useful)
I really look forward to see what you do with this character <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/e/p/e…" alt="
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